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my story

Sat Aug 1, 2009, 12:39 PM
please be gentle..:/
this is just the introduction......

EPISODE ONE

Scene 1
Pouges entry
Pouge wakes up..scared out of his mind..from a dream ,he looks around his crappy one bed room apartment with trash all over you cant even see the carpet ,spider webs in all four corners of the room ,bars over the windows like a prison cell. His father makes him sleep in the living room on a little twin size mattress ,his mother sitting bed side comforts him ,he noticed she was crying and has a black eye. He ,trying to control his anger,says"again mom ..ill fucking kill him!".His mother whispers "shhh he'll hear you.....its ok pouge it was just an accident ,he doesnt mean to ,he loves us","If he loves us why would he treat us this way?!" She kisses his forehead silenceing him for the night "shh..go to sleep i love you..."Pouge unwillingly obeys.

Scene 2
He wakes up in pain yelling at the top of his lungs..Dazed and crying. All he can do is feel and all he feels is fire or some kind of burning sensation . "i..i cant see anything " ,he touches his eyes,"ow! they hurt so much ..my eyes ..their swollen shut..Ahh!!" he feels a force to his head that blacks him out. In his sleep he hears his mother crying out"What have you done!.....stop! ,STOP!! You'll kill him! YOU"LL!....."he hears nothing for a while so he forces his eyes open unable to move. He sees his father holding something in his hand ,but everythings a blur ..he trys his hardest to focus on the object and just then his father walks into the light. Shocked he feels his heart pulse speeding when he sees that the object is a bloody bat, he traces his eyes down to his fathers other hand to see his mothers dead body being held up by her throat bruised up ,her eyes blood shot staring straight to his, he freezes and blacks out again.

Scene 3
He wakes up numb from head to toe suprised to still be alive .He forces his body up spotting his blood below ,he walks with a limp looking for anyone. He walks toward his fathers room ,he hears nothing but his beating heart, he starts to shake uncontrollable with fear ,knowing what he'll see he keeps going inch by inch .......thump.....thump...silence.....he hears nothing ..time stops just for him.He pushes the creaking door slowley ,stops and falls down staring into his mothers eyes.
He waits there for what felt like hours .His eyes turned bloodshot from lack of blinking ,they burn and itch and feel like someone stabbed nails into them.He shuts his eyes all dryed up and chalky from crying too much ,after a couple of seconds he meets eye to eye ,after about an hour of silence he crys"i love you mom", ...staring back at him she blinks.

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I'm 17 and I live in sa. I am a musician and I play the bass guitar. My life is my gf Phoenix and music. My favorite band is --Escape The Fate--:) and I love art and stories, especially if they are dark and realistic.

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    :iconphoenixcursed:
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    nm really, working on a few naruto pics currently. Trying to rewrite my one fanfic chapter because I cannot get it right. Usual things for a bored narutard insomniac :) lol

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